Wednesday, 27 December 2023

Ponyfic Roundup 472: Spotlight on Binky Pie

Read it Later story count: 96 (-1)

Words read this week: 53,100

It's not my usual practice to have a PR straight after Christmas, but I thought what the hay? Binky Pie is that rare thing, a crossover I can actually understand properly, and so I'd been wanting to read it off and on for ages. At last I had both the inclination and the time! As ever, spoiler-free potted review up top, spoilery details below the page break. Here be footnotes!

Binky Pie by Miyajama
Pinkie Pie
G4; Comedy/Crossover; 53k words; Aug 2011–Jan 2017
; Everyone

[no short description]

First things first: you do need to have at least a passing acquaintance with Terry Pratchett's Discworld series, specifically the Death books, to get the best out of Binky Pie. I mean, reading Discworld is a good idea anyway, but even more so here. The setup could be described as "Pinkie agrees to replace Binky as Death's horse, but ends up being Death. Sort of." While inevitably the prose isn't quite up to Pterry himself, it's a pretty readable and entertaining piece, fitting nicely with the mid-period Discworld I like.¹ "Bill Door" is given an unexpected but surprisingly successful romantic subplot, while Ridcully and the Unseen University wizards are much their usual selves. Applejack does well in a smaller role. Twilight's part is perhaps slightly obvious and overwritten, and not enough use is made of there being Mrs Cakes in both worlds. Still, considering the challenge, I was pleasantly surprised. As such, a very high three. I could see some readers making it a four. ★★★ Edit: now including me! I had missed (because my phone didn't render it) that Death's SMALL CAPS speech formatting was included. This really added something, and that pushes it over the three/four line. Upgraded! ★★★★
¹ After the essentials were firmly established, before it all got a little too world-weary and cynical for my liking.

As you will doubtless already know, spoilers lurk below!

Wednesday, 20 December 2023

Ponyfic Roundup 471: Hearth's Warming Special

Read it Later story count: 97 (+1)

Words read this week: 42,294

The fire of friendship lives in our hearts, and so I'm sure does the warm glow of festive ponyfic. In honour of the rapid approach of Hearth's Warming, today I present a special six-fic edition of Ponyfic Roundup. Usually I mix authors I know well and those new to me, but this time I am being self-indulgent and concentrating on stories by writers whose works I've liked in the past. As you can see, I liked all of them this time.

A Holiday Errand by Pen Stroke
Yule in a Donut Shop by Rune Soldier Dan
The First Stitch by Carabas
How Lily Longsocks Spent Hearth
s Warming Eve on the Moon by Pascoite
In the Bleak Midwinter by Skywriter
Badvent Calendar by Estee

★: 0 | ★★: 0 | ★★★: 2 | ★★★★: 4 | ★★★★★: 0
Note: I use a skewed rating system. A fic I enjoy an average amount scores two stars.

Monday, 18 December 2023

My Little Repeats 152: "Honest Apple"

This was right up there with Vinyl revealing hers!
S7E09: "Honest Apple"

3 Jun 2017

My original rating: ★★★
IMDb score: 6.5

The one with Apple Bloom's attempt at a "signature hat"

Thoughts: By this time Treehouse TV was well ahead of Discovery Family, hence my 2017 review being in mid-May. Not the most popular episode perhaps, though I quite liked it six years ago. Now? Well, not that much to say, to be honest. I still don't dislike it, but I did find my attention wandering a bit more. Applejack feels a bit early-series sometimes, and she's just plain rude when mutilating contestants' designs at the contest. The Strawberry Sunrise bit is amusing, and Photo Finish is always fun. Inky Rose is probably the best of the show competitors, and she probably has the least annoying voice to boot! "Honest Apple" is really more a high-end two than a three-star episode for me now, but I still don't agree with those who think it's dire. Nothing with that Rarity guitar sequence could be dire.

Choice quote: Applejack: "My closet's nothin' but twenty versions of this hat!"

New rating: ★

Next up, "A Royal Problem". While there have always been some dissenters, in 2017 this was among the most popular episodes of S7, and I was very much in the pro camp. The question is, will that still be the case today...?

Wednesday, 13 December 2023

Ponyfic Roundup 470

Read it Later story count: 97 (+1)

Words read this week: 32,813

After all the thousand-worders recently, this week we're in a little bit of a lull, after that and before the festive edition. (For details of what's coming next week, see the end of this post.) Today I'm going to follow my usual pattern when nothing else is happening: I'll be reviewing five stories which caught my eye for one reason or another. They are:

Barn room brawl by appletini
Cafeteria Control by Justice3442
Five Hundred Little Zombies by GroaningGreyAgony
Beyond a Boundary by The Cloptimist
Sunsplit by Masterweaver

★: 0 | ★★: 1 | ★★★: 2 | ★★★★: 2 | ★★★★★: 0
Note: I use a skewed rating system. A fic I enjoy an average amount scores two stars.

Tuesday, 12 December 2023

Things you will* see in Ponyfic Roundup in 2024

Yes, there's an asterisk in that subject line. What do you mean, why am I being strange? Are you brand new to this blog or something? I suppose I should put the matching asterisk down here somewhere, so stay tuned for that. But in the meantime...

Author Spotlights – Unlike some reviewers, I've barely done these. Okay, there was the mushroompone edition in March, but before that you'd have to go back a year and a half to when I featured Lets Do This in October 2021, and before that the last author to get a PR to themselves was Chris in March 2018! My mind was nudged a little on this by seeing Ghost Mike's look at Aragon fics that came out yesterday. 

As to who I have in mind for a possible Spotlight? Well, that would be telling. Obviously it's going to be someone who isn't just a one-hit wonder, but beyond that you'll just have to wait and see...

Random(ish?) Fic Edition – Every so often in the past, I've picked a bunch of fics fed to me by a random number generator and reviewed them almost whatever they are. "Almost" because I do tend to set a few ground rules so that I don't end up having to read the 4.5 million words (you read that right) of My Little Pokémon or something. These editions don't tend to have huge hit rates, but they're fun as a very occasional thing.

Silly Theme Edition – Now this really is something that I'd like to do again. Way back in the mists of time (PR 137, December 2016) I did a Roundup where all the fics featured spoons. It was on Hard Mode, too, which meant no Silver Spoon stories could be included. This is the level of idiocy to which I aspire. I was there once, and perhaps those halcyon days can return in 2024.

No major changes in format – I'm very comfortable with the cosy little one-paragraph reviews I've been writing for the last nine and a half years. Mike can happily chat for 4,000 words in a blog post, but I'd just sound boring if I went on for that long. Hay, I don't even include the cover art in my reviews. Yes, they tend to be a bit longer than when I started doing this, but not that much longer.

Two big milestones – The very first Ponyfic Roundup appeared on 26 March 2014, and so I'm approaching its tenth anniversary. I'll see what I can think up for that auspicious occasion. And as if that wasn't enough, sometime in the summer (depending on whether I take the odd holiday break) I will reach Ponyfic Roundup 500. I'm unsure whether I should be pleased or scared that I've gone on this long!

* Maybe. There you are, you can stop fretting now. Wasn't really worth scrolling all the way down here, though, was it?

Saturday, 9 December 2023

Looking back at Ever Let the Fancy Roam

Previously in this series: Sunset's Sales Snag.

It's a month and a half since I last did this, so let's bring up another of my stories for me to yatter on about. Take it away, RNG, please! And... okay, it looks like today I'll be talking about Ever Let the Fancy Roam. This actually won the "Making the Most of the Mundane" contest, which admittedly only had three entries. With a +34/-0 thumbscore as I type, this story has had a rather better reception than Sunset's Sales Snag. Well, mostly it has, and that's where I'll start this ramble.

You see, this comment was the first feedback I got after publishing it way back in February 2015. It's fair to say it wasn't the most complimentary note I've ever received. The writer suggested that I didn't care about Fancy Pants, that the characters spoke in clichés and lacked meaningful voices, that it was "a pastiche of weak "British" stereotypes¹ [that] drools out of the writing like cottage cheese."
¹ Dash it all, I am a weak British stereotype!

The weird thing is that this comment wasn't accompanied by a downvote. Since the writer wasn't personally offensive I did respond in some detail. That seemed to end the interaction, and the comment writer hasn't done much on Fimfiction – though they did apparently log in as recently as April this year. I feel I handled it reasonably well, though it wasn't the nicest way to start!

Fortunately, subsequent comments were nicer – not devoid of criticism, but that's no problem. The thing is, this story was a bit of an "I just want to write a Fancy Pants fic" deal rather than anything more considered. He clearly needed someone to interact with who wasn't Fleur, and so I gave him the kind of long-serving butler in Silver Cloud who I felt wouldn't be entirely a pushover.

Some of you may have twigged why I named him Silver Cloud already, but in case not: first, it's a good pegasus name and flight is clearly useful when working around a rambling old stately home. Second, it's the name of a classic Rolls-Royce model from the 1950s and '60s. Old-fashioned now but still well thought of. Could do worse for such a stallion, don't you think?

As for the plot of the story... given the contest it was entered for, it couldn't be too exciting, so it features Fancy and Silver making preparations for a little "At Home" soirée to which (due to unfortunate Canterlot social obligations) they have to invite Jet Set and Upper Crust. This is very much the "Sweet and Elite" Fancy Pants, by the way: I dislike how he was characterised in some later episodes.

As Present Perfect noted, Fancy is deliberately written with a few contradictions. He'll happily subvert some of the protocol and traditions, but there is still a line that should not be crossed between master and servant, as he makes clear to Silver at one point. Fancy's liking for backgammon is also deliberate, though here there's not a lot more to it than that I rather like backgammon.

The ending to Ever Let the Fancy Roam is its weakest part. I don't think it's terrible, but it is a little bit lacking in impact – and here I can't just point to the contest theme since there are various ways it could have been made better. My problem really is that I like feeble jokes, and so too often I end stories on them. Note to self: not every kind of fic works like a feghoot!

One commenter asked me if I was considering writing any more Fancy and Silver stories. I never have, but I do confess that I rather like the way they play off each other and so I won't entirely rule it out. (I will rule out ever making them a romantic couple, by the way. I just don't want to go down that route.) Also, it was nice to use "foalish" in a story. Stupid horse puns are important.

Wednesday, 6 December 2023

Ponyfic Roundup 469: Thousand Words Contest II winners, part 4 of 4

Read it Later story count: 96 (-1)

Words read this week: 10,000

It rained for about 48 hours non-stop earlier this week. It wasn't much fun. Fortunately, it's not raining as I write this. Anyway... time now for the final part of my look at the fics that won recognition in the Thousand Words Contest II. There are ten of them: five Silver Medallists and five Gold Medallists. Here's the rundown:

Silver Medallists

Her Mothers' Daughter, Unfortunately by TheDriderPony
For a Love of the Arts
 
by The Red Parade
Compound Fracture by Equimorto
What Are You Doing, Stepfish? by TheDriderPony
D E A T H w i s h / meso, strato, tropo by The Red Parade

Gold Medallists

Don't Go Through. You Can't Stop Me. by daOtterGuy
The Woodcutter and the King of the Forest by TheInfamousFly
Bury It by daOtterGuy
Ornithomancy by daOtterGuy
Please don't do this by Kodeake

★: 0 | ★★: 1 | ★★★: 3 | ★★★★: 6 | ★★★★★: 0
Note: I use a skewed rating system. A fic I enjoy an average amount scores two stars.

Tuesday, 5 December 2023

My Little Repeats 151: "Hard to Say Anything"

"You know, Scootaloo, I don't know if relying on the Grimm version is such a good idea."

S7E08: "Hard to Say Anything"

27 May 2017

My original rating: ★★
IMDb score: 7.2

The one with the Mayor's cast-off rainbow wig

Thoughts: To repeat the last section, this – Becky Wangberg's only FiM episode – is also the one with Feather Bieber Bangs. More significantly, though we didn't know that at the time, it's the start of the SugarMac relationship that would eventually lead to marriage. Big Mac trying to kiss the sleeping Sugar Belle didn't go down well with everyone, but otherwise this ep is more entertaining than I remembered. There are some fun one-liners from the CMC, and Feather Bangs himself eventually turns out to have a better side. Decent song, too. The, well, groupies joke is overused, though, and most importantly the central ship is just "these two are in love, okay?" which irritates me. It's like an "and then romance happened because shipping, 'kay?" fic, and I'm not desperately keen on those either. That's what keeps an otherwise potentially three-star episode down in the high twos.

Choice quote: Sweetie Belle: "Hey! That's our metaphorical sunset they're riding off into!"

New rating: ★

Next on the list is "Honest Apple", an episode which isn't very popular but which a small slice of the fandom really likes. I was fairly positive about it first time around, but by no means ecstatic.

Friday, 1 December 2023

Ponyfic Roundup 468: Thousand Word Contest II winners, part 3 of 4

Read it Later story count: 97 (nc)

Words read this week: 12,000

This is being published just a tad later than I'd intended, so I hope you didn't suffer too much from being kept on tenterhooks! We're getting ever higher into the batch of successful stories from the Thousand Words Contest II, and in this penultimate part I'll complete my reviews of the Judge's Prize fics and also cover the Bronze Medallists. That means twelve – count 'em – stories on the slate, so let's waste no more time:

Judge's Prize fics

The Pact by Unimpressive Chaos Lord
The Trees of Harmony by Reviewfilly
Cherry Pits by The Red Parade
Hall of Mirrors by RB_
Magic is Most Imminent by heartlessons

Bronze Medallists

The Swing by metronome
I Can't Ask Fluttershy Out by SparklingTwilight
Hop-Frog Afternoon by Pascoite
Through Time, With Love by daOtterGuy
Medusa by NorrisThePony
An Unroyal Wedding by Shrink Laureate
Frag/ment/ed by Dashie04

★: 0 | ★★: 1 | ★★★: 7 | ★★★★: 4 | ★★★★★: 0
Note: I use a skewed rating system. A fic I enjoy an average amount scores two stars.