Read it Later story count: 187 (-1)
A week late, but at last here is another Spotlight edition of Ponyfic Roundup! I can't even remember when I last did one of these, though with luck the wait before the next one won't be quite so absurd. Off we go:
Drifting Down the Lazy River by Georg
OC, Seaponies, Celestia and Luna
Romance/Adventure; 99k words; Feb 2017; Everyone
A frustrated young orphan with a talent for painting attempts to run
away from his rural village and escape to Baltimare on a raft, only to
find out that the river Fen holds an unexpected answer to his problem:
Seaponies
This is the sequel to
The One Who Got Away (
PR 233), and it definitely helps to have read the original although I'd suggest it's not
strictly necessary. This fic, which has significant and deliberate echoes of
Huckleberry Finn, is both longer and better than the first. Our hero this time is not Baron Gaberdine, though both he and young seapony Ripple are major supporting characters. It's an orphan named Turpentine who is
deeply set on being an artist. His devotion to that shines through all the way through the fic, and though very occasionally I wondered whether he was sounding a bit adult for a ten-year-old colt, Turpentine's unhappy foalhood has reasonably made him old beyond his years in some ways. I was pleased to see that his orphanage
wasn't a place of terror and misery, which makes a change in fiction!
PaulAsaran says, "The pacing is perfect, the plot moves from point
to point with enviable smoothness, the characters are endearing," and I can't improve on that summary. Recommended! ★★★★
There's a bit more comment –
spoilery comment! – after the break.